Student's Analysis

I noticed that the intro paragraph is well written ; he or she includes the speaker, the audience and also makes it clear the tools he/she will use to write her analysis paper. The writer also does a great job introducing the Rhetorical situation. The paragraph is structured well, but it could have a better thesis statement. I noticed that he or she didn’t include any concessions.
As for the body paragraph I feel that everything was in order, he/she talks about the rhetorical tools that he/she mentioned in the intro paragraph he/she writes in order as it was listed. I really like the style of this paragraph he/she used quotes to give evidence of her assumptions. This paragraph is very well written and it provides all the information to support it.
I find myself always having a hard time with the conclusion but this writer did a wonderful job closing his/her paper everything flows and gives even more support to the body paragraph. He/she writes their opinion in a way that it is convincing without using me and I words. This paper was a good example of a rhetorical analysis it provides all the information you need to know; the style and how he/she said it.